Desicritics Comments on Poetry: See What You Will

Comment by erotik

Mon, 9 Mar 2009 13:11:01 EDT

Dies ist ein gro�er Ort. Ich m�chte hier noch einmal.

Comment by erotik

Mon, 9 Mar 2009 13:10:20 EDT

Dies ist ein gro�er Ort. Ich m�chte hier noch einmal.

Comment by Aaman

Fri, 18 Jan 2008 04:13:43 EST

Welcome, please do reduce the length of a bio, perhaps a short poem would be nice?:)

Comment by Samrita

Fri, 18 Jan 2008 03:48:08 EST

1: THANK YOU 2 a) No, did not consider 'of'. b) Well to think of it now, 'of' might grammatically be the correct usage, but while i wrote it was 'by' that came naturally. Also, 'Of the flight of a fly' seems laden with tongue-twisting alliteration. Don't you think? reply to the digression: I should have read the clause properly! You'll definitely come across longer verses in this space from here on... ;-)

Comment by temporal

Fri, 18 Jan 2008 02:19:32 EST

samrita: 1: welcome to DC 2: a minor quibble... in this line: By the flight of a fly? did you (a) consider "of" and (b) if not, why not? digression: aaman never lets me publish a poem with word counts less than that of the author's intro oh well ;)