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<title>Comment by Tina</title>
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<description>eat like a bird , </description>
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<title>Comment by Tina</title>
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<description>eat like a bird , </description>
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<title>Comment by ma511zda</title>
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<description>c549t</description>
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<pubDate>Tue, 6 May 2008 02:28:05 EDT</pubDate>
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<title>Comment by wvfuangkru</title>
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<pubDate>Mon, 25 Feb 2008 08:56:54 EST</pubDate>
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<title>Comment by ma449zda</title>
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<description>c327t</description>
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<pubDate>Sun, 16 Dec 2007 13:35:48 EST</pubDate>
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<title>Comment by ma82zda</title>
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<description>c73t</description>
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<pubDate>Sun, 16 Dec 2007 13:13:14 EST</pubDate>
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<title>Comment by ma962zda</title>
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<description>c587t</description>
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<pubDate>Sun, 16 Dec 2007 13:12:13 EST</pubDate>
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<title>Comment by ma311zda</title>
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<description>c237t</description>
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<pubDate>Wed, 12 Dec 2007 23:41:01 EST</pubDate>
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<title>Comment by Arnie</title>
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<pubDate>Thu, 29 Nov 2007 02:52:33 EST</pubDate>
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<title>Comment by lopieur</title>
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<pubDate>Fri, 2 Nov 2007 03:32:11 EDT</pubDate>
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<title>Comment by temporal</title>
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<description>J, BJ, vikram

moucho gracias</description>
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<pubDate>Tue, 23 Jan 2007 15:37:31 EST</pubDate>
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<title>Comment by Vikram</title>
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<description>Beautiful! Thanks for Sharing.</description>
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<pubDate>Tue, 23 Jan 2007 09:41:00 EST</pubDate>
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<title>Comment by BJ Kumar</title>
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<description>T-Bhai, 

Good work!

(Disclaimer: my command of Urdu words (and spellings) is terrible!)

Khaab jaltey nahin angaaron mein
Khaab biktey nahin bazaaron mein
Khaab woh yaar hain
Jo rehtey sadaa dil ke karib
Khaab reh jaatey hain
Bus aab-e-chashm yaaron mein
Khaab ke moal kabhie
De nahin apnon ko sakey
Khaab hain chheen liye
Sabhie ghair-daaron ne  
Khaab bus ek jagah
Rehtey hain zindaa aakhir
Khaab woh khaab hain
Jo dil ke chhupe taaron mein!

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<pubDate>Mon, 22 Jan 2007 14:28:08 EST</pubDate>
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<title>Comment by Jawahara</title>
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<description>This reminded me, for some reason, of that old song: Mainey teray liye hai saat rang ke sapney chune...
I liked this one, t.</description>
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<pubDate>Mon, 22 Jan 2007 12:35:02 EST</pubDate>
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