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Poetry: in a few words

November 01, 2006
temporal

kun fa ya'kun

a welled tear

abhi mut jao

light within light

kaash waq't thum ja'aye

say more
with less
suggested
her smile

a flash freezes
that moment
-- long hours
of discourses
fail to discern

a grin, glare
smile, frown
even silence
conveys more
i'll be silent

love people who are in awe of words. words are the sole arbiter and the final survivor. desicritic editor, slave and slave-driver.

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#1
Tanay
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November 3, 2006
05:42 AM

t,
when less is more,silence conveys the message...

#2
temporal
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November 3, 2006
05:24 PM

thanks tanay

the medium between silence and excessive verbiage is interesting and intriguing

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