good riddance, dee

(sigh) ok the purist's version

inspired (and inspored and inspured) by the article and responses at Co-existing With Unwanted Guests

good riddance(a tongue-in-cheek heading)

some deep early sunday morning thoughts and
if you are being picky ....fine make them
early Sunday afternoon musings on them
roaches, rodents, insects and creepy crawlies
and the well meaning advice that pours in
from formulae developed in shiny labs
the sprays, chemicals, powders, roach motels
to those passed bosom to bosom developed
by folks long dust and ashes, long, long gone
(while ironically, the pests survive)

[chorus - come on everyone, join me
oh what to do, oh what to do
oh what to do, oh what to do]

don't know what was i imbibing when i
suggested ghostbuster's magical wand
comes sujatha with the odorless dough
shantanu does a modi on them roaches
gentle dr politics reminds gently
of the world rat day on april 04
and i wonder if the rats were rodents
or the corporate whistle-blowers
saks and kishore join the welcome wagon
(secretly thinking if we can survive
so can you dear dee, so can you dear dee)
sami counsels playing el mariachi
while ray suggests egg shells as a cure all
as if dee hasn't spread enough of them
(wink wink - them egg shells that we walk on)

[chorus - come on everyone, join me
oh what to do, oh what to do
oh what to do, oh what to do]

hoping with earnest hope dear dee am sure
at some time you will come to peace with them
roaches, rodents, insects and creepy crawlies
but tell me what do we do, what do we do
about these word-pecking, word-blasting poets?

Excellent - we can read out this poem to the rats and lizards and lull them to sleep, then spring on them with a fiendish cackle!

WOW! Temporal,thats the first poem written for me even if it was inspired by my pest ordeal;)

I could write another one for the doe eyed baby mouse I found in my kellog's box last night but alas I'm not much of a poet and for writing this poem next time you and M are here I will make a special dinner for you guys:)

Nice poem, it was fun reading it!!

Loved the chorus part ;)

oh what to do, oh what to do :)

Is this like the re-incarnation of the 'Pied Piper'?

Hey Temp. So far as creepy crawlies are concerned, you can try peacock feather. I am sure you haven't tried it yet. Stick some on walla of your house and see them running away...but I can't advise anything about "word-pecking, word-blasting poets".

Meera, exams over? So, what about the creepy crawlies at the courts?;)

t, really cool!